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Here is a reminder of our story, have another listen and take a look at the activity below.

Because ||Read Aloud || Mo Willems and Amber Rea

Score by Mo Willems Performance by Amber Ren The love of music and how it inspires a little girl to make her own. A diffrent kind of story from Mo Willems bu...

Activity

 

Today we are going to write our own inspiration stories. Using your mind map of who has inspired you, can you create your own 'Because' story. This story have a unique structure because all the sentences start with an explanation of how someone has helped, for example 'Because there were copies of the music, the orchestra were able to rehearse'. Your story needs to follow the same structure. Your sentences need to start with 'because' to explain how the person has inspired you. Here is an example of one of my sentences:

 

Because they had carried on with their home learning to the best of their abilities, Hawks Class showed their teacher how mature and independent they can be.

 

This sentence follows the same format as the story and is made up of three sections. 

1. Explanation of what that person/thing has done to inspire 'Because they had carried on with their home learning to the best of their abilities'

2. Who they are 'Hawks Class'

3. The effect they have had on you 'showed their teacher how mature and independent they can be.'

 

Your task today is to write your 'Because' story using this format. Make sure you finish the story with a paragraph about you and how you are going the use this inspiration in the future.

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