Writing

Good morning! I have done some writing about the half term holidays for you to read. I 'm really proud of my writing and I've checked it for spelling and punctuation. The one things I do need some help with is my paragraphs. Can you please organise my writing into paragraphs and then find the P.E.E for each? 

I hope you enjoy reading all about my holidays and thank you for helping me organise my writing!

Mrs Williams