Self-Belief

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SPaG

English

Your job today is to spend a little time editing and improving your lines from yesterday.

Can you read it aloud and does it have a regular rhythm like the original text?

Could you remove, replace or add in extra words to improve the impact?

Are the rhymes clear? Can words be exchanged or swapped to improve them?

Send us your lines via the blog so we can all see them!

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